There is no more bad things

there's no more grey clouds 

there's no more rainy days 

there's only sunlight shinning through

there's no more silent tears 

there's no more weary years

there's only happiness all around you

there's no more all alone 

there's no more go away 

there's only please stay here with me

there's no more be afraid

there's no more go and hide

there's only stand tall and face your fears

there's no more dark side 

there''s no more good byes 

there's only hey how are you

there's no more aching pain

there's no more lonely hearts 

there's only love for everyone

there's no more grey skies 

there's no more silent griefs

there's only smiles all around 

there's no more go away 

there's no more silent days

there's only nights full of laughter

there's no more falling down

there's no more lying on the ground 

there's only spread your wings and fly

there's no more missing you 

there's no more crying eyes 

there's only i will be home soon

there's no more crying 

there's no saddened days 

there's only smile and keep moving on

there's no more blood shed 

there's no more falling walls

there's only happy things surrounding you

there's no more bad things 

there's no more melting wings 

there's only rainbows, peace, and love

Reviews

[Ashley Lytle]

I love how you acknowledge that bad things have happened but you declare happier things to come. I found the flow of the words as I read it to be interrupted some times. At least for me. Other then that I found this to be a great poem. You have managed to create a truly motivational type of piece that tells us that there might be bad things that happen but good things shall come your way.

[Chris]

Nice submission. This poem is very interesting as it leads the reader to wonder whether an individual is in denial about a deceased loved one, or possibly if it is simply a recount of an idyllic world. The repetitive layout makes reading more rhythmic.

[Breanna Riddle]

Thank you so much for reading it :)

[Chris]

No problem, interesting to read.

[NWC]

Very Positive. Appreciate the effort. Good work

[Kieran]

Such a passionate poem. Shows such deep pain but also a clear understanding of life and the joy that comes with it. Love this

[Breanna Riddle]

thankyou soo much

[Lynda]

I just finished reading Darkness and went looking for more of your work and found this beautiful piece that is the complete opposite of Darkness...If Darkness exemplifies Hell...There's No More Bad Things rings true of Heaven...you are a real poet...

[Breanna Riddle]

Thank you that really means a lot im glad you like it and that means a lot because your poems are fantastic