Will you stay

This poem is about my mother who passed away when i was nine and how i felt her sudden disappearance from my life affected me.

Will you stay

or go away

fly up high

or stay by my side

Will you stay

or will you go

run away

or stay at home

will you stay 

or find a way 

to say good bye

or maybe say it another time

Will you stay 

or go away

whatever you do 

please just take me too

Author's Note

please ignore the lacking of punctuation

Reviews

[Lynda]

I am so touched by this...it is simple...pleading...real and honest...your Mother is with you every day...every time you think of her, she is right there...those we love our standing just around some corner...in another place...but they never leave us alone...keep writing...writing is such a blessed way of releasing our feelings...keep sharing, the world needs your words...somewhere there is another young woman missing her mother too...your words can help to heal...

[Breanna Riddle]

thank you im happy to hear that you like my poetry and your right i started writting to deal with my emotions and i thought it was going well so i started sharing to help others and i know shes not far but it is hard to be here and not have her there with me

[Ganesh Kelagina Beedu S..]

A touching poem erupted with strong feelings

[Breanna Riddle]

Thank you :)

[Laura S-C]

It is really good it flows and is very touching.

[Breanna Riddle]

thank you :)

[Breanna Riddle]

i feel this explains how i see my mothers death and how i wish she would come back