photos

I always loved taking photos

from the trees in the fog invested park

to the river that runs between the road and the grass

of the public park where you can see

the children running,

playing,

so carefree and innocent

with no worries or shame.

I love taking photos

of you and me

capturing the happiness between 

the fault lines 

of when we collide

and make something beautiful.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Sounds on the surface like the recollection of a beautiful romance. That said, I wonder if the carefree picture of the children is a contrast to the speaker's life. Also, I wonder what is meant by the fault lines. Not trying to read in something that is not there, but I like to explore all levels of a poem.