A Theory Of Sunsets

I think the real beauty
is that each sunset paints
a thousand different colours.
Through a thousand different moments
Which is upon a thousand different lips.

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[emipoemi]

If you made this all one sentence/thought, and with the addition of a "through" or "with" or some sort of intriguing preposition beginning "a thousand different moments" (which I would also make one single line.....the isolated "moments" is unnecessary), and this poem would then be a bona fide gem. Short and powerful! Well freaking done!