My Fellow Writers

My Fellow Writers

A Poem by breakthebrokenone
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The people will know who they are and I hope they read this because what I do, I do for you

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My Fellow Writers,
Thank you so much
for empowering and guiding me
for holding my hand along the way.
You have made me strong
and given me purpose
when I thought that I was alone.

My Fellow Writers, 
You have all become a family to me. 
Brothers and Sisters who love each other
a home away from home.
We support and we share and we have compassion
more than I have known.

My Fellow Writers, 
I thank you all from the bottom of my heart.
I owe you all so much
for showing me my worth 
and being the light to guide me home
in the wee hours of the night.

© 2017 breakthebrokenone


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.......Wow! this is a gem! A genuine gem! Solemn, profound, deeply moving! My only note here would be to tweak the musicality in the Second Stanza Last Line by adding an "ever", and tweaking the sound of the the very last line of the poem by changing "night" to "morn" to compliment "worth" and "home" , and also, to my knowledge the expression is "the wee hours of the morn" (not that "night" is bad...in a way to stray from the real expression by poetic license, but it's more for sound. Because poetry packs great punches with the sound component). Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, thank you! You are obviously so grateful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice sentiments in the poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


We truly are a family here. Many of us have been around for years. Were always glad to be of help.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good to had found you today. I enjoyed your work. I'm a Leonard Cohen and Nick Caves fan. Thank you for sharing your poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


.......Wow! this is a gem! A genuine gem! Solemn, profound, deeply moving! My only note here would be to tweak the musicality in the Second Stanza Last Line by adding an "ever", and tweaking the sound of the the very last line of the poem by changing "night" to "morn" to compliment "worth" and "home" , and also, to my knowledge the expression is "the wee hours of the morn" (not that "night" is bad...in a way to stray from the real expression by poetic license, but it's more for sound. Because poetry packs great punches with the sound component). Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dear Sister
Know that we are here
We will always stick by your side
Until the end of time

Know that we will help
We will rise, we will fall
But we will have survived it all

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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breakthebrokenone
breakthebrokenone

christchurch, canterbury, New Zealand



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I am 21. I would love to hear what my fellow poets think of my work. I post new work every second day. I have tattoos and love Leonard Cohen and Sylvia Plath. I listen to a lot of Lana Del Rey and I w.. more..

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