Maybe

Maybe

A Poem by breakthebrokenone

Maybe he would love me if I weren't so critical of my work.
Maybe he would like me if I smiled a little more. 
Maybe he would want me if I wore more makeup and pretty dresses.
Maybe he would care more if I drank red wine and ate cheeses from France.
Maybe he would be more compassionate if I could quote Cohen or maybe Poe.
Maybe he would value me if I drank coffee without sugar.
Maybe he already does.

© 2017 breakthebrokenone


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Love is loving the person. Loving their strength and weaknesses make them special in your eyes. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to logical ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


(emotional huh!)
Maybe it's wrong to say please love me too
'Cause I know you never do
Somebody else is waiting there inside for you
Maybe it's wrong to love you more each day
'Cause I know it's here to stay
But I know to whom you should belong



Posted 7 Years Ago


He must!
liked it, simple and such genuine stuff.
story of almost every girl

Posted 7 Years Ago


well,if he don`t,he should

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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breakthebrokenone
breakthebrokenone

christchurch, canterbury, New Zealand



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I am 21. I would love to hear what my fellow poets think of my work. I post new work every second day. I have tattoos and love Leonard Cohen and Sylvia Plath. I listen to a lot of Lana Del Rey and I w.. more..

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