How Do I Make You Stay

How Do I Make You Stay

A Poem by breakthebrokenone

How do I make you stay?
When you obviously love another. 
I try to give my all for you but it is never enough. 

I do my makeup nicely
I wear your favourite dress
I try and do it all for you
Just to make you stay. 

So how do I make you stay?
It's clear you aren't really interested. 
I have tried to be everything for you
But it's never good enough. 

I try and be seductive
I even try and look like her
But you just roll your eyes
Because I'm no longer the one

© 2017 breakthebrokenone


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Flow of the poem is really good.
good job!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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breakthebrokenone
breakthebrokenone

christchurch, canterbury, New Zealand



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I am 21. I would love to hear what my fellow poets think of my work. I post new work every second day. I have tattoos and love Leonard Cohen and Sylvia Plath. I listen to a lot of Lana Del Rey and I w.. more..

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