Meaning.

Meaning.

A Poem by Julia
"

It's a little different. See if you can figure it out.

"

Help.

Can anyone hear my plea?

Please.

Will anyone save me?

I.

Can’t do this on my own.

Need.

Someone to save me.

My.

Heart is turning to stone.

Life.

Is passing by.

To.

Cry so much is such a terrible thing.

Mean.

Demons arise in the night.

Something.

Or someone, please protect me.

Again.

Love has left me for dead.

© 2010 Julia


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Very nicely written. You can see your creativity in the format. Thanks for sharing:)


Posted 14 Years Ago


Vulnerability was creeping through the lines. There was uncertainty too. It could be that something happened which triggered change and it could be the reason the persona wanted to gain the meaning of her life back, thus, "I need my life to mean something again". I think that was the message the persona wished to convey. This was creative. The style was unique. By the way, it's plea not plee, a typo, I assume. Keep writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good poem. I like the enjambment. It creates more stress on the subject. Good job, Julia.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is such a deep, vivid write. Your form and flow are simply wonderful, and the message of longing and affirmation universal. Amazing poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 25, 2010
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Julia
Julia

Columbus, GA



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I'm Julia Aleece Watson. I'm fifteen, and I'm a hopeless romantic. I write novels and I never finish them. more..

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