You

You

A Poem by breaking_heart

The pain filled the hole
you left in my heart

© 2015 breaking_heart


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Nice! All that left when someone leave you was pain . Very short but heartbreaking.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You said enough. A complete poem. A beginning and a ending. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


very nice ...you may be young but you are good.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on August 8, 2015
Last Updated on August 8, 2015
Tags: sad, depression, depressed, suicide, suicidal, love

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breaking_heart
breaking_heart

Toronto, Canada



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I am going through a hard time and decided to write. I'm not a good writer. I'm 15, so I'm not too experienced. My punctuation will be sloppy. Same with my grammar. Please excuse that. Thank you more..

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