You
A Poem by
breaking_heart
The pain filled the hole
you left in my heart
© 2015 breaking_heart
Reviews
Nice! All that left when someone leave you was pain . Very short but heartbreaking.
Posted 9 Years Ago
You said enough. A complete poem. A beginning and a ending. A very good poem.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
You said enough. A complete poem. A beginning and a ending. A very good poem.
Coyote
very nice ...you may be young but you are good.
Posted 9 Years Ago
very nice ...you may be young but you are good.
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breaking_heart Toronto, Canada
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I am going through a hard time and decided to write. I'm not a good writer. I'm 15, so I'm not too experienced. My punctuation will be sloppy. Same with my grammar. Please excuse that. Thank you
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