Maybe it was...

Maybe it was your eyes and how they set me off.
Maybe it was how you held me, letting me cry on your shoulder.
Maybe it was how your lips felt against mine.
Maybe it was why we were together, for all the love we gave each other.
Or maybe how those three words seemed to come out so perfect.
The look and meaning in your eyes, how they set me on fire on the inside.
How they maybe it hard to look straight into your eyes, because i knew you ment every word.
That you wouldn't say it if you didn't mean it.
I love you never sounded so amazing.

Reviews

[Jen Marks]

cute , i like it :) the similarities in the first four lines are nice. is there a reason you put it all in past-tense? i'd just suggest to exclude the repetition of "your eyes" in the sixth and seventh lines , that's all !

- jen marks ♥.