Crying in the inside forever

Crying in the inside forever

A Poem by la_laland29
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a girl who needs someone to stay alive, or she thinks she's a nobody

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NO, I won't be presured into them. My heart belonged to someone, and he broke it, like it was nothing. HE forgot about me, and left me for a girl who had no life. My life was with him. And i'm a nobody, I have no one, so don't waste time on me. I am no one special. Just the girl you see cry at movies, and skip class to cry in the bathroom. A girl who waits till everyones out of the hall to walk through its dark shadows. I walk into the class with makeup running down my face. I need someone to live, not to be here. I need you back. Please, I'm begging, I need you.

© 2009 la_laland29


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la_laland29
This was based on something that happened last year for me, I tried hard to make it into a poem.

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i agree 100% with visions of doom. this is yet another great poem! keep it up.

Posted 15 Years Ago


aah tis a fine effort ye have made too . we all feel we need someone to make us whole , the poem reflects that, ye should be very proud of yourself

Posted 15 Years Ago


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la_laland29
la_laland29

Turner/Sorrento, ME



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name:Bri Status: sick and tired of cheaters age:15 where I live: Maine (sadly) Where am I able to let go? I'm nothing more nothing less. My writing lets my feelings out. Stupid boys, cheaters are.. more..

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