Daddy's Little Girl

Something I've never had, but I think every little girl needs/deserves. It explains why I've never been the little girl dreaming of a wedding or that special someone.

Every little girl 

Should be daddy's little girl

Placed on his shoulders

Shown to the world

Every little girl 

Should be treated like a princess

Placed before everything

Because she is his vision

Every little girl

Should dream of the day

When she walks down the aisle

And her father will say

This is my little girl

And forever she'll stay

I've raised her with love

each and everyday.

Reviews

[Areya Valena]

This is truly beautiful. I have a father who is in my life, but he doesn't treat me very well, so when I was little I'd dream of my brother walking me down the aisle, never him. I can't be ungrateful because i do have a father, but i can understand what your saying especially when you say "every little girl should be treated like a princess, placed before everything" I was placed last, I do agree that every girl that deserves it, i hope it only makes you stronger, and smarter in the long run :)

[-K]

very heart felt. love it. i may not be a girl, so i cant be "daddys little girl", but i know how it is not to have a father around at all. his loss though on both our behalfs...on a brighter note, your a great writer, great poem, and u gotta keep up the good work. btw thanx for the great review, i appreciate it. good work though. ttyl.

[★ Aeryn Harmonica..]

This is a gorgeous poem. I love the parallelism. I think it is so wonderful that you worked a strong subject into a simple poem and still were able to show the intense love between father and daughter. Very lovely.

[Coyote Poetry]

I hope I can with my Daughters. I have three. All are my Angels. A beautiful poem. Description and your poem was a pleasure to read. Thank you.
Coyote