Daddy's Little Girl

Something I've never had, but I think every little girl needs/deserves. It explains why I've never been the little girl dreaming of a wedding or that special someone.

Every little girl 

Should be daddy's little girl

Placed on his shoulders

Shown to the world

Every little girl 

Should be treated like a princess

Placed before everything

Because she is his vision

Every little girl

Should dream of the day

When she walks down the aisle

And her father will say

This is my little girl

And forever she'll stay

I've raised her with love

each and everyday.

Reviews

[Areya Valena]

This is truly beautiful. I have a father who is in my life, but he doesn't treat me very well, so when I was little I'd dream of my brother walking me down the aisle, never him. I can't be ungrateful because i do have a father, but i can understand what your saying especially when you say "every little girl should be treated like a princess, placed before everything" I was placed last, I do agree that every girl that deserves it, i hope it only makes you stronger, and smarter in the long run :)

[Cheyenne]

This is a really nice poem. I feel like im daddys little girl all the time :) Even though in life i try to strain away from being that "Little" girl all the time This is going in my favorites for sure. And every little girl deserves a man that will treat her like Daddy taught her she should be treated... like a princess

[Kris Hood]

i love it you truly have a blessed talent from God keep up the good work just got on his site read my stories please and tell me what you think

[deeps]

My Goodness this is so beuatiful and warm.
I like this, so beuatiful.

[Staci Brown]

i'm usually not one for rhymes but this poem works :) you've expressed your thoughts and delivered your emotions nicely. well done :)

faerie blessings!

--stacilynn aka faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[Dutch Jr.]

I like your structure, its parallelism and the rhyme scheme, and rhythm is really catchy. I don't criticize poetry, since it is usually just the poet jotting down his or her feelings, I think poetry should just be read and enjoyed for what it is.
And I do agree--every girl should have that father figure, but the world isn't perfect. But I think its those imperfections that make us better people.

[gimpy]

ohhh so beutiful every little girl should be daddy's little girl such a beutiful poem and true

[Moth Phoenix]

Nawwwwwwwwww ='[ adorable.
I don't know my father and reading this makes me wish i did know him =[
Great job!!!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I love this; my sentiments exactly! My daughter thinks I'm giving her away at her wedding but I'm telling the guy I want a rebate. lol Well, she cost me a few hundred grand; I don't see why he should get her for free! Actually, she's PRICELESS and will always be daddy's little girl. Great piece of poetry!

[Samuel Dickens]

This is very sweet and touching, bre, especially considering your situation. I had three sons and no daughters, but I know that if I had been blessed with a girl, she would indeed have been my little princess.

[Lola Nation]

Aw, don't feel bad, I'm a daddy's girl and I don't day dream that way either. But yes, I agree, everyone should have it... you captured something special here I can understand wholeheartedly.