How to Make Me Your Sweetheart

Of breaking a girl and piecing her back together to make her yours.

make me your sweetheart;
notes left on my doorstep
leave gift after gift--
i'll barely spare them a glance
barely give you a chance
pick your heart off the floor
it's not you i adore

make me your sweetheart;
learn his name, then persist
tug at threads until i rip--
watch as i fall apart
then offer up your heart
never be discouraged, disgraced
continue; until he is replaced

make me your sweetheart;
leave me endless notes
never give up hope--
when i tell you no
when i ask you to go
put your heart on the ground
you'll see, i'll come around

make me your sweetheart;
i lose myself in sweet intoxication
pour another, i will not be shaken--
when your lips press to mine
when our fingers entwine
i'll let your hands roam my body
thoughts hazed; i'll let you have me

make me your sweetheart;
hold me when i wake, cold, sober
warm me, refuse to let it be over--
imagine light in my dead eyes
how these lips would curl into a smile
i'll only ever give you my heart
with sweet intoxication in the dark

make me your sweetheart;
i've forgotten how to be
anything but misery

make me into something
you believe me to be

Reviews

[JMKane117]

I love the line leave me endless notes. It says so much in so little. I'll defs be reading more!

[Brenda Woods]

Thank you so much!!

[Chris]

so many KNOW but few admit they aren't with the one they wanted...

[Brenda Woods]

Definitely! Thanks for the review :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

i'll only ever give you my heart
with sweet intoxication in the dark

You poured the feelings of love ultimately and all throughout. Nice to read!

[Brenda Woods]

Thank you!

[Julia Mars]

The pull and tug of love can be very stressful but if you find that common ground it can be very fruitful.
I really enjoyed this one Brenda.

[Brenda Woods]

Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it!

[Ben Noah Suri]

This write made my day.... It did make me smile... Liked the ending "make me into something
you believe me to be"

[Brenda Woods]

Ah, thank you so much!!

[Thesecuts]

wow this is absolutely perfect. I love it. You have great talents and they will only grow, keep writing.

[Brenda Woods]

Aww, thank you very much!