I read all four Brenda. They are all heartfelt, of that there's no doubt. They tell a tale of a relationship full of miscommunication (in as much as the protaganists arent sure enough of their own selves to be successful in a long term venture with another - at least thats what I got from the four stories in totality) - and also of insecurity.
They are straight from the vein and very moving. The desire for forgiveness, for accomodation, for peace and ultimately for love is tangible.
Of them all, the image of a wedge driven between the hands of both parties stuck with me - a very powerful image.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you very much, ANTO, for your kind and insightful feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the poems.
This series truly captured my attention. It was so emotional, so real, and so easy to read. Thank you for sharing. Truly such a beautiful short series.
I read all four Brenda. They are all heartfelt, of that there's no doubt. They tell a tale of a relationship full of miscommunication (in as much as the protaganists arent sure enough of their own selves to be successful in a long term venture with another - at least thats what I got from the four stories in totality) - and also of insecurity.
They are straight from the vein and very moving. The desire for forgiveness, for accomodation, for peace and ultimately for love is tangible.
Of them all, the image of a wedge driven between the hands of both parties stuck with me - a very powerful image.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much, ANTO, for your kind and insightful feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the poems.
19 year old costume student. I love costumes, cosplay, music and writing. Flute player since 2005, I also play piccolo, guitar and ukulele. Most of my writing tends to be poetry or lyrics/songwriting,.. more..