Fragile

Fragile

A Poem by Brenda Woods
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Of the type of boys who cradle china dolls in their hands to fool themselves into believing they're strong.

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she's a delicate flower to him
dark hair, ivory skin
the very image of a porcelain doll
small, fragile
one wrong move and she's broken

he holds her, shields her
wonders how such a beauty exists
how she's survived all these years
small, fragile
yet she's never been broken

she's made of starlight and love
and cares for him so
he doesn't know how she can be
small, fragile
he'll never let her be broken

she's a delicate flower to him
but little does he know
she's always protected him
small, fragile
he's always been so broken

and she'd let him pretend to be the strong one

© 2014 Brenda Woods


Author's Note

Brenda Woods
Formatting is a stylistic choice - lack of capitalisation and minimal punctuation is deliberate.

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Really enjoyable , it gives a very strong feeling to the who is writing and ideology and concept is very good this is a great piece of work


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brenda Woods

9 Years Ago

Ah, thank you so much!
I really enjoyed this lovely poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brenda Woods

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you did - thank you very much.
Wow I love this it is so amazing, pen on girl!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brenda Woods

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much - will do; I'm working on writing more, got a bunch of poems/song lyrics I need to.. read more
Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Well being obsessed is nothing to be ashamed of :)

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Added on November 24, 2014
Last Updated on November 24, 2014
Tags: fragile, love, romance, poetry, poem

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Brenda Woods
Brenda Woods

Auckland, New Zealand



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19 year old costume student. I love costumes, cosplay, music and writing. Flute player since 2005, I also play piccolo, guitar and ukulele. Most of my writing tends to be poetry or lyrics/songwriting,.. more..

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