Your Mirror

I'm jealous of your mirror.
It's the luckiest thing you have.
For every morning and night when you look into it.
It gets to be just like you.

 

 

Perfect.

Author's Note

Short, but hopefully to the point : )

Reviews

[Doreen]

Short and to the point, yes. Also very sweet. The only thing I noticed is the third line is symmetrically a bit long. I thought "when you look into it" would do on it's own line, but that's only of my humble opinion. Nice write. I like this.