Hold on

Have you ever wondered about how to move on, when everything seems to being breaking?

When, with every step you take, you realize your heart won't stop aching?

And you know that whatever was promised you, was all them faking,

and lying, and it left you crying, dying inside to the point where you're so cold you're shaking.

You just need to know, need an answer, need some closure to this agonizing pain,

But don't go in circles, don't hide and try and shove it down, you'll end up insane.

Trust me, hold on, keep walking. We're here to hold your hand and to make it plain,

that we care about you, that we understand where you are, because we were there and just the same.

Keep holding on to me, keep holding on with what strength you have, don't let your will bend.

Maybe there is a cyclone tearing away at your heart, but please hold on, don't be sucked into the wind.

These tears stream down my face for us both, because broken hearts haunt us both, and we need to mend.

Love will find us, or we'll find it. But for now, let it out, because we still hurt over a shattered end.

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

a young poet with talent ! next time try the couplet, it is very hard to sustain a rhyme over four lines...
look forward to reading more...