Away

Away

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack
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About life...

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Alone I sit
Puzzled with bliss
I wonder how I managed this?

I left in tears
I embraced fears
Now at the end, I open spears.

Hard at times
Well at times
It seems a tragic tale?

I left, I lost,
I became, I crossed.
Now only stars burn bright.

Dazed in love,
Heart all hung,
Happy to have it done.

Now in the distance
I hear cries
Sweet whispers 
under dawn skies.

A harsh thud pounds
A bulge appears
Is this my future?
Is this a fear?

Nay but the sweet sounds
they beckon one home.
On to the lovely green sea
To help them - welcome home.

© 2011 Brandee D. Hack


Author's Note

Brandee D. Hack
Ignore grammar. Any thoughts? It's been a while. Sorry everyone.

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I like the description and the photo of the flower. I had to read the poem a few times. The detail was amazing.
"Now in the distance
I hear cries
Sweet whispers
under dawn skies."
A very good ending to a excellent poem. Where you get the photo?
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i like the description i can even picture it in my mind. Good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the description and the photo of the flower. I had to read the poem a few times. The detail was amazing.
"Now in the distance
I hear cries
Sweet whispers
under dawn skies."
A very good ending to a excellent poem. Where you get the photo?
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brandee D. Hack
Brandee D. Hack

Ireland Co.



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Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..

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