Explosion of the Winds

An embraceable of change with obstacles...

Strange wisps of wind
they covet the night.
Breezes uncover,
change what might.

Love is in the air
a twist of fate...
Remember the winds
the desirable state.

Fire and Ice...
they meet at the rise
the sun falling quickly
the ice to be the prize.

Now the air is filled
spindles of confusion array.
Loves serendipitous hold
keeps it all the same.

Now off to the garden we go,
off to make this right.
ask the sidhe to bring down the rain...
wash troubles away; make bright.

Author's Note

I needed a moment to just pour out what i have been feeling for a while...and this is probably just one of many... :/

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Great flow, a very beautiful peice, nice work

[Ladysue]

I like it...a good poetic flow and a wonderful ending...Good writing...

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is gentle and kind. With a soft and easy movement you took me on a journey with you to find peace and wash your troubles away. I like the total poem. A very good ending to a strong poem.
Coyote