Whispering Winds

O calm melodic soul

how you tease me so

 

your wam breeze trembling

sand between my painted toes

 

Water rushing through the buildings

castles made by the children

 

Trees swaying in the wind

while chimes prevail and glisten

 

O harp of my soul, a melody

you take the air away

 

until the kisses of sun returns

and the breath of your glory is mine

 

Thy whispering fate mount me

take me away on your sea

 

Show me the fate lain before me

Dare you? Make me tremble at thine fate...

Reviews

[Shellie]

I thought the verses were very well described to lay out an image. I liked it!

[Tate Morgan]

Man that one was intense .

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very beautiful. Your soft words like whispering in the dark. I like the total poem. Your words always sweet and delicate. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[An owl on the moon]

This was so beautiful.. Just read through and could feel a peace washing over like waves... Your descriptions evoke deep emotions.. Wondrous!