Dancing in the Leaves

Dancing in the Leaves

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack
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A story that's simple but complex...

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Sometimes I think of you

I often cannot recall

All the words you have said

Or the ring of your sweet call

 

But as I lie awake at night

You simply rejoice in my head

The sweet melodies you play

They dance upon my bed

 

Now the road may rise to meet you

And a heavy burden will fall

Because being yours is a treasure

One I will always recall

 

So when I rise to meet you

Sand envelopes my toes

And often I am sad

Because of the doors you close

 

You have opened my eyes

To a sweet melody I lost

And now I hope to see you

Dancing in the leaves, in the fall ...

© 2010 Brandee D. Hack


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Ahhhh...it was lovely.......

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love this...


Posted 14 Years Ago


Brandee How beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago


The imagery is absolutely stunning, along with the form and flow... Everything works together to bring this beautiful blessing to life.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A warm and sweet piece of writing. It flowed elegantly and spoke tenderly. Nicely done...

Posted 14 Years Ago


A sweet poem of love and tender emotion. I like the pace and flow of your words. You took the reader(Me) with you on a good journey through emotion and desire. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Brandee D. Hack
Brandee D. Hack

Ireland Co.



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Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..

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