Shreds of ComfortA Poem by Brandee D. Hackmy experience, just recently....15.3.10....
I left him today and hooped things would change
but things will never be the same. I cried as I walked down the broken, cracked streets. I wonder if my choice deserves her treats. My friend came to comfort me but all I did was cry for my heart is forever broken...God help me die! I never thought it would come to this until he did me wrong. He stuck his hand upon my face and I left, feeling so wrong. I never thought he would hurt me, that his anger was just a mask. But now I know the awful things are not just from his past. But now I'm left all alone, not even she can see what he's done. I have blood everywhere...and I don't know how to begin to bare [it].
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1 Review Added on March 16, 2010 Last Updated on March 16, 2010 AuthorBrandee D. HackIreland Co.AboutHello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..Writing
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