Broken Stars

Broken Stars

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack
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A story.

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Late night dreams
and screaming cries.
Nothing lives here
and nothing dies.

It's a waste
to lie here.
All is alone
Mind: spinning crazily.

I don't know.
My life's broken.
Is there anything
to take away?

There is only
one thing I
want to say.
Come to bay.

I want you.
Come and stay.
The Ocean's big,
safe to say.

I wonder if,
you're meant babe?
Help me see
the stars above.

© 2010 Brandee D. Hack


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A excellent poem. The words flow like music. I like the desire and the hope for someone in the words in your poem. Being alone by the ocean can be lonely. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Brandee D. Hack
Brandee D. Hack

Ireland Co.



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Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..

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