Since Before

The description is in the poem.

Since there was love in the air

and not a care,

what at all should be now?

I want to show,

those poet's in tow,

how much the rose means.

I bet that I will never smell the scent

of it's lovely petals that have seemed to rip.

O what shall I do now?

The beautiful chocolate spread over the ocean

has melted beneath the volcanoes passion.

The Gods have weilded their glorious reign,

and brought unto me another feign.

One of which I cannot bare.

I wish that Aphrodite could help my rose

and Poseidon to dawn his powerful pose,

then I could be able to say a few words.

These words would be to many to write

only to whisper in the still of the night.

What will happen now?

I know there is not more time for goodbyes

because now all is left is a barrel of sighs,

and the sinking sand burying my soul.

Maybe one day the sun will rise

and we will be sitting across the skies

then with this be final?

I hope with the time this is

that we will be about to close this fizz.

Will it happen, a final goodbye?

Only that would ease this pain.

Will the most dreadful disdain...

I want to stop crying, is that okay?

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is a sweeping, epic feel to your words... carrying your love and longing over time... the scope of the gods... This brings such a depth and richness to your final lines... wanting the pain to go away... to be able to stop crying... One decision or another. Beautiful and bittersweet...

[Frantzuu]

this is beautiful, great job :)

[Kelley]

I like the way you describe your emotions and the feeling you get
from just one rose.

Great poem thanks for sharing.
Kelley

[charlotte talley]

this is a deep poem, I like the way you put it all together with such passion. keep it up. good write.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like how you brought us into the story. The lines kept getting stronger. Story became larger with each added part. Ending is true. We need to find reason and purpose to ease the pain. A excellent poem.
Coyote