Swirling Tea

Swirling Tea

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack

The swirling tea steams off the stove,
I wonder what the Irish thought here.

They mix their tea with milk and sugar,
and one more thing that other's discover.

They add a decadent taste
like none can find.

It swirls with steam
as the milk swirls round.

Then last that's mixed 
is a sweet perfume.

A glorious flavour
of alcohol to be sure.

They add a small touch,
one can adore.

My final lullaby subsides
and I add some Bailey's --
                 ...a final stride.

© 2010 Brandee D. Hack


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Definitely stirs up some memories.
I was never really sure why they call it "Irish a drink" - are you people made out of alcohol? (though I can't say I'd be surprised if you were)
I find alcohol very unproductive when it comes to solving your problems, or dealing with your pain - it just makes you feel worse.
I never drink when I'm depressed, because I know that the alcohol would just get even more negative feelings and thoughts out of me.
What helps is talking about it.

I am, however, a well known drinker when it comes to happier occasions, and I did very much enjoyed the poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You create a very good cup of Irish beverage. I drank a few Irish coffees in my time. A excellent poem. Your description and story was very good.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Definitely stirs up some memories.
I was never really sure why they call it "Irish a drink" - are you people made out of alcohol? (though I can't say I'd be surprised if you were)
I find alcohol very unproductive when it comes to solving your problems, or dealing with your pain - it just makes you feel worse.
I never drink when I'm depressed, because I know that the alcohol would just get even more negative feelings and thoughts out of me.
What helps is talking about it.

I am, however, a well known drinker when it comes to happier occasions, and I did very much enjoyed the poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brandee D. Hack
Brandee D. Hack

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Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..

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