Fire Burn and Cauldron Bubble

All my messed up emotions.

O how it is to touch you

and know passion is gone.

I feel your love inside you,

but I'm in this drowning pond.

I know what it is to touch you

and know every thing's alright.

But when your gone I'm in two,

God only knows what takes flight.

I feel nothing anymore

but sorrow and regret.

But it seems the more I go

I cannot help to stay.

You pull me ever near

leading me on it seems.

But what am I to do?

I'm busting at the seams.

I tried to show you today

how much you meant to me.

But all it seem that I have done

is take away our glee.

I am always wrong

because I never speak.

But what am I to do

when you make me weak.

I cannot help but love you.

Without you I would burn.

In hells eternally flames consume,

my sinful lust that churns.

How sweet I imagine passion,

but none of it is real.

For all you feel is action,

like I am a prize, just revealed.

Yet I cannot turn away

for all the things you've said.

But in the end I feel my heart

is tearing; turning dead.

Until my life has ended,

I will never know why.

You have left me broken

all hung out to dry.

I am not a mat for feet.

I have feeling's I'll admit.

But never try and hurt

my tender heart you have.

For my passion play begins.

While fires burn and couldrons bubble,

I am always in your trouble.

Just until all this ends and mends.

Reviews

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you flow again is wonderful and you have a great rhyme but the 3rd stanza and last two stanzas both break the rhyme and i think it hurts it its good but i think u could make it much better but again im wrong bout this stuff alot