A Simple Kiss

A dream and a thought and a wish all together. :)

Oh kiss my lips,

I dare thee.

On my tips?

God help me!

I love you!

And do you?

I imagine 

it's pure bliss.

Just watch me.

See me turn.

I love you.

Doth mine burn?

I speak of eyes,

you beauty, it's bright.

Reminds me of candle-light.

Just brush mine sight!

Those tender eyes.

Do they prove?

I want you.

Be with you.

Ask me once.

Non! Dare twice!

With rapture blessed,

your neck bent...

For one pleasure,

and one alone.

I ask for

a simple kiss.

Author's Note

Dedicated to a dear friend. :)

Reviews

[Y.F.]

For a minute, I found myself with eyes closed and puckered lips.

Your poem is just so perfect in every way - wonderful flow, great structure, written perfectly.
I'm speechless.

This friend is very lucky.

[xXx]

tingly .. love the language used .. flows nicely and keeps attention throughout .. very nice write

[charlotte talley]

oh, this is out of sight. good write, i like it. and you have titled it a good title. keep it coming. I know your friend loved this poem.

[Nate E. Flake (Cösmic ..]

good ole love ballad, helps relieve the heart! Nice Job!

[lauren emily]

Bravo! This is an excellent piece! I love the flow..I look forward to reading more of your writing :)
Keep up the great work,
~Lauren