La Pecher a la Mer

La Pecher a la Mer

A Poem by Brandee D. Hack
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abab cdcd efef gg....fisherman sitting in a boat...falling in love with a mermaid....10 syllables.... NOT COMPLETE.

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I sat upon the little wooden boat.
I have sailed so far I couldn't see the shore,
as the fish bite my mind is set afloat.
She swims and in my mind I feel allure.
Then in my heart I pray and wait for you,
like gentle winds that leave me wanting more.
The water so caressing and so true.

© 2010 Brandee D. Hack


Author's Note

Brandee D. Hack
A Sonnet written for my British Literature class. no comments yet plz. not done. thx

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Added on January 5, 2010
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Brandee D. Hack
Brandee D. Hack

Ireland Co.



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Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..

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