I think this is a fabulous piece of work! I am not very into relationship/love based poetry; nature, history and philosophy are more my cup of tea. But this minimalist structure here is spot on and this flows wonderfully! The style reminds me of Kay Ryan's work. Kay was 16th Poet Laureate of the United States, just so you know to whose work yours is being compared. Huge Kudos on this piece!
I think this is a fabulous piece of work! I am not very into relationship/love based poetry; nature, history and philosophy are more my cup of tea. But this minimalist structure here is spot on and this flows wonderfully! The style reminds me of Kay Ryan's work. Kay was 16th Poet Laureate of the United States, just so you know to whose work yours is being compared. Huge Kudos on this piece!
Hello all. My name is Brandee. I have wrote many different genres of writings for many years. I hope that by putting it up that that will help me get some feedback and constructive criticism. .. more..