My Heart's Plea

Simply a wonder of visions.

I wish you would start all over with me. I want it to be like it was. Just simple love between both of us. You keep saying you want it to be different, like it used to be...But I don't know if it will. I haven't changed, only grown. I'm older now. I wish that I could tell you everything. That I could let you inside. Show you every emotion I have for you, but...That's impossible isn't it? I wish it were so. I want to tell you all of my feelings. I want you to know everything that I feel about you. I want to show you. Just like that place by the river that I played when I was young. I want you to be the one I share all of those sweet and tender moments with. I love you. I only wish that I didn't anger you sometimes. I want to be the perfect one. The one who is your true muirmn breatha dans, or irish soulmate. But you love me for who I am. Yet will kindness ever blend into your soul. I miss the old you. Come back to me my love. Come home.

Author's Note

A true bearing of my soul into words. What are your emotions to this? How do you feel? What do you think of this> I hope I took all your advice correctly.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is a beautiful prose piece. This was what I meant earlier in my review about prose being common language. This is a perfect example! It is so real and full of the beauty of your spirit that it reaches right off the page and drags the reader in. Seriously, I am very impressed. You really do have some wonderful works and a gift of talent behind them!

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we must go back to the moment that create the love. I understand your poem. We wish to re-track words said and improper deeds done. A excellent poem with very good description and story.
Coyote.

[Dillon Cotter]

very deep and passionate. i like how you truly express your words and giving the reader a beautiful idea of imagery.

-Will

[Just Charles]

No one is perfect. What makes this piece work is how relatable it is to a broad audience. Sometimes, people grow apart. It cannot be explained.

[Bennyb15]

I really like this poem. I, and I am sure many others have gone through similar situations like this, so it makes it easier for readers to connect with. Great job!

[Chirinos20]

Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of art. It just gives an inside to what is that we all want. Some of us want to be our old selves and at the same time not. It is true. We all change and what we were yesterday we will not be tomorrow. The change might not be so dramatic unless something happens in your life that is very good or very bad. It is best if its good. In most cases is not.....

[Dev]

I love the last two lines the most "Come back to me my love. Come home." Its very sincere. Beckoning someoe you love to get back to the good ways of life. Theres hope about helping the person come back to the right track. Theres a mix of emotions in this write. Very good read

Awesome. So much can be learned about the situation just from this short piece.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a nice writing. It shows what happens as we change. The sincerity in this poem haunts me.

[Iota]

I can feel the love and wanting of love to come back as before. I wonder thou can it be like before since before didn't work. It was moving to be honest, and I imagine the person who heard it would want to come back at least in their hearts.This was really good.