Winter Callings: A Collection of Sorts

This is what I wish for when it snows...or more that I have been wanting to do this...

[prose poem 1]

"Snowy Splendor"

Gorgeous, succulent snow falls down on my head. I wonder; Will I ever see a snowman grace my presence? I wish for you a thousand times over. A splendid sight indeed. Fore I have never held snow in my hands - "A sad sight," Daniel deems. And thus, our hunt begins, for a snow so glistening and thick. To make the perfect bliss of joy...A Pure Holiday Treat! 

[Prose Poem 2]

"A Winter's Tale"

A fireplace dances beside my head. I feel your body near mine. Behind the curtains of this still night, a storm of snowy splendor rushes through the moon-hidden sky. You take me in, a warmth unseen. Your fire is brighter than the hearth near me. Thy body takes my blanket, rippling around my skin. I feel you deep. down within. Beautiful glistening, breathing. Our limbs. Two piece making a whole, like the day and night meeting. Your passion play has erupted within me. I tremble. What a feeling! Up and down, sways of the wind. Hands caressing. Minds revealing. Glourious nature, a loving dream. A miracle to take place. Beneath this - a wintery scene. 

Author's Note

I think I did these right. What do you think? Should I be more descriptive?

Reviews

[charlotte talley]

I think that these two prose poems are descriptive enough. I especially like prose number 2. for once go out and hold some snow in your hands, it is a wonderful feeling at least it is to me, knowing that our heavely father from above made this.

[deeps]

This is wonderful!
I think this is descriptive enough. It holds together well.
I like this alot as well. You did a wonderful job writing this.