Falling forever.

This is actually what I wrote just now came to me in my head. wierd.

Going lower- I done did fire
Slow as I'm falling I hit a ground...

I still can't think of a word to describe this..
Windy- I would have never guessed...
Dead bodies coming from the bottom..

I'm a little confused.
Where the Hell am I?
This isn't Hell.

Those strange faces glance at me from a far...
I'll figure out running isn't such a bad idea...
I wish my legs were cars..

That creak couldn't have came at a better time.
This leap seems impossible
Falling- I would have never guessed...

Waiting on the bottom
I guess it'll never come
I'd rather be dead.

Still falling...

Reviews

[RebeccahCecile]

I love this piece.

[S Sanders]

So this is, like, a freewrite, where you sit and let the words, pen, or keyboard take you wherever? I do that sometimes and am amazed by what comes out of it. Subliminal messages are often times the strongest. I have no IDEA where you're going...or falling, but cool. Where ARE you--elaborate. I would've thought hell until you said, "this isn't hell."