Attack(past is past so forget it)

:) this one was a lyric that i turned into a poem like most of what i do lol. i kinda like it though :P

A darker shade of led to pass of those cold, cold eyes.

 

Later off will pretend not to see that bold, bold disguise.

 

A basic full glass of flavored past

 

Waiting in you for the ATTACK.

 

At last, at last, at last,

 

I'll post up something to be proud of you,

 

at last, at last, at last,

 

Deep down, your just a run around,

 

Waiting for the ATTACK.

 

A former friend of traits to catch on to these cold, cold, lies.

 

Only you can see yourself face to face, and find your bold, bold, disguise

 

A hand full of your favorite trash, waits in you for the ATTACK.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

i hid certain words with a lighter shade just and one is all white its the second to last line, just to show a disguise something being hidden but hard to see, you know kinda the point of the poem.

Reviews

[Rachel]

extremely thoughtful; it is a masterful piece of writing that shows how anxiety and regrets can physically harm someone

[Harley Ann]

hmm. it doesnt quite make sense...that could just be me though lol. i can definitely feel emotion, though, and the concept of hidden words is pretty neat :)

Also, you need more pictures on your profile. :P