Addiction.

aw the romance is in the air. :P

I'd rather have your kiss

 

Then any other girls attention

 

I'd rather have your hug

 

Then any worthy thing mentioned

 

I'd rather have your love

 

Then any sweet addiction

 

sing me the sweetest lulaby

 

baby.

 

baby.

 

Under this world of suprise

 

we stand

 

at the edge of the ocean,

the sky is perfect blue,

no clouds to ruin this clear day,

 

i say

Marry me.

 

marry me..

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

aw :). like the perfect propasal, when i ask someone to marry me, going to be at the ocean on the beach.

and solidad where's the misspelled stuff in that!!!! :))))) :D just kidding.
im sure i mispelled something. lol.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. The words would make a woman desire marriage and more. Real gifts of love come from the heart. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Liza]

is this love addiction or dedication - either way - very lovely - a man that commit is rare and a gift

all i would change is then to than... then is to explain chronological order, than is to explain comparison...

[ali]

This poem exemplifies your lyrical side for sure, I think it should definitely be set to music. You captured the essence of what you were going for; a romantic proposal. It is sweet in its simplicity.

[EvilAngel]

lucky girl.you should read this to her when the time comes.its sweet and romantic

[Adam :P]

stupid lulaby

[Solidad]

Lol 'lulaby' is spelled 'lullaby' Other then that you did good kid =)