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A Poem by Adam :P
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Think of something real deep and terrifying then read it. lol.

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You remind me..

 

Of eyes closed in the dark...

 

The sun has now gone away....

 

If only we could have taken the pain away from the start.....

 

I never thought  I'd fall apart......

 

But I never had someone to tell me that everything was ok...

 

Yeah, you never said it was ok....

 

But I found reasons bypass the drugs....

 

You're sweet when your sober....

 

But that means, you're never sweet much.....

 

When this time is over lets look back and see our live as a drug.

© 2010 Adam :P


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Posted 13 Years Ago


Great, Meaningful, and Deeply written.


Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved this poem. The meaning within the poem was very deep. It is really strong. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


A poem that is strong and has deep meaning!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sweet poem. Says a lot!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Adam :P
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