Burn it all.

people get so fake the real them dies. it happens to scene kids, and followers most of the time, why can't people just be there selves.

If you get any more fake than this, then the real you will be dead.

 

Why is it you spend more time awake then asleep in bed?

 

And this heart hates the site of you, so tear this place down.

 

And this heart takes the best of you, so secure it this time around.

 

Maybe you were dead before the actual death.

 

 

 

Burn it down, burn it down, come in as silent as your kill is the sound, Burn it down, burn it down, Come in death, be bound.

 

Author's Note

thanks to solidad did some good editing. much help :) thank you!

Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

Urges us to remove our masks and discover who we really are. This is very well written, especially the final two lines that read like a loud chant. I can hear it even from here.

[A.hasnain]

Wow that was intense! Intense but kind of true, a lot of people can relate to your writing :) Keep me updated , and btw thank you for your review on my poem "Speak Your Mind" x It was quite helpful :)

[ali]

I love the first five lines because they go in a direction that wasn't expected, they flow really well and have a good message. The last two seem kind of off to me, as if you were just trying to rhyme. They don't make a lot of sense, and don't flow rhythmically. Also, a few spelling and grammar errors: the first "then" is actually than. Actual is spelt with one l

[Solidad]

"And this heart takes the best of you, so secure it this time around."
Love it, love it, LOVE IT! and you're very welcome.