B.L.O.O.P

B.L.O.O.P

A Poem by Adam :P
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Words that were said have now died.

 

So wake from your bed, realize, its not the first time you've cried.

 

Could you relief the hearts, the theft, the time?

 

Would you remember forever, forever?

 

In you head a life time.

 

Now its never since the ""your mine"

 

How does it seem to all go away?

 

She wouldn't care if you cared anyways.

 

Another love another dieng words.

 

What broke her heart was the least of what hurts.

 

So cover up a heartless urge.

 

Words sworn like a rosebush over grown with thorns.

 

and she screams.

 

"Aren't you forgetting the broken hearted?! Aren't you regretting getting started!?"

 

I know that this time these tears weren't meant to cry.

 

 

© 2010 Adam :P


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I think this was pretty interesting. I really think you did a nice job on this. The words can tear at you sometimes. I know how that feels. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


interesting perspective....to me this is about a broken heart and motivation. I enjoyed the write and your thoughts...thanx 4 sharing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Checked it out Loved it!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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