Hate. hate. HATE.

short to the point. wanted to add more and make it longer but can't get my thinkin to get going. so im leave it this.

She left a note for you beloved,

To slit your throat it would be good.

And put everything she hates in one line.

(your name here)

Author's Note

haha. kinda mean.

Reviews

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Wow, I must say mortal I LOVE this! Very deep, emotional and just... how should I put it? Blunt? Urgh, I don't think that's the word I'm looking for, but it'll do. This is amazing, I loved it, the brutality is just great and that final line; wow! Awesome writing here, very well done indeed~

[Nish Nish the Fish]

Well that was certainly a slap in the face! Makes me feel guilty, yikes!

Well done! That was a rude awakening!

[Millie]

This is a bloody amazing statement and i'm not dening this it could be true for so many people

[Black Cat Fever]

I like it, a very powerful statement, that's for sure.

[Liza]

beloved hate - the fine line of weakness in vulnerability when love turns bitter

[how.girls.get.clean]

mean, but somewhat nice. i really like it :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Mean, emotional, but true. These are the thoughts of some people to others, to wish they would just die and be gone forever. So the other wouldn't have to bother with them anymore. Wonderful imagery! Loved it.

[Dizzy]

Nice, Sweet and to the point. It reminds me of a mean but amazing song I love. =D

Bitter.
Full of emotion.
Nice imagery.
All in all, GREAT job!