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A Poem by Adam :P
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What ifs.

"

Dreams are aside of my time.

 

Thoughts come out to say You lie You lie.

 

If i could have stopped to listen...

 

If I could have poured hearts out to you.

 

So just leave me in the dark like I am.

 

So I can be nothing, with more then I am.

 

Praying as if it was overratted.

 

Wishing as if it was.

 

Underestimated.

 

 

© 2010 Adam :P


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You are a very excellent writer.
I sense, perhaps, heartache in this?
Either way, very nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


"Praying as if it was overrated."

That's a good line. Aside from minor spelling errors you're a very good writer. I like this one its quite 'honest'

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Adam :P
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