Use to this.

Use to this.

A Poem by Adam :P
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Just heart breaks. simple as that.

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I can deal with this again.

So hear me this, before you make a move know me by more then friend.

Love falls from those eyes.

Every frown is a smile disguised.

Repair.

New start.

I'm so use to broken hearts.

 

© 2010 Adam :P


Author's Note

Adam :P
had more but didnt feel like the rest fit in with the poem

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a heartache is not easy to overcome; its the decision to numb or delve through despite the pain that we are faced with every time our love is not returned or taken for granted....its self care that might get us through...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Nice write about an emotional experience. In your notes, you say that you had more but didn't feel like it would fit in with the poem. Try releasing all that you want to say in your writings---pour your heart out, then go back and tailor it until you feel you've expressed just what you want to say!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short, but that's okay.
The length really doesn't matter, anyways.
All in all, this was a great read.
Nice work. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


A new start a different heart. =) I like it very simple though you left me curious at what the rest was.

Posted 13 Years Ago


In life there are many hearts broken along the way, so many broken bones, so many tears fall silently behind closed doors, your poem screams out of such pain, well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it, very true. Heart break is the Inevitable to any relationship. (at least from what I've witnessed.)

Posted 13 Years Ago


That's what hearts do, they break. Well written =)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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