Un-complicated.

I wrote this about doing the same thing and never changing.

I'm headed nowhere- But I'd be glad if you tagged along.

 

I'm sure will end up somewhere- But I'll be more lost here then gone.

 

I'm not promising or wishing- But I'm ready, be strong.

 

 

 

I'll end up running out of ideas.

It all comes togather and starts to make sense.

I feel on the lost night, your skin.

You're much to sense.

I'm coming from nowhere back to nowhere.

 

I'm headed in the same direction I've always been.

So easily I forgive.

I'm sure we could try.

If we fall it should be alright.

 

Hesitate.

 

Un-complicate.

Author's Note

muah!

Reviews

[Dizzy]

Interesting form. A little confusing but I got it once I read it twice. I like the flow still. and only one spell check that I could see. =)

[Adam :P]

yeah its hard to read other people's poems and get the same thing they do. pretty much what you said. left the city didnt end up nowhere. left the girl didnt end up nowhere. came back to the city came back to nowhere came back to the girl to try again. haha i confused myself on that one. its whatever. what you said is right! lol

[Britny_ Grady]

The first part seemed like you were leaving someplace however, the farther in to the poem you got the more it seemed like you were leaving a specific person and were returning for her despite the issues that are there. It's a great poem. I hope I understood it properly.