Breathtaking..

I picture this as someone saying it with anger and real fast.

I tried my best but only ended up with a sigh.

I look back to find I've made mistakes to wonder why.

So afraid to risk another heart break.

You are the only one I'd take the risk on.

Hurts to know this love started to end up as broken hearted.

 

You made it clear.

If your the one I seek then that I'll never reach.

To dream the day of what will never come.

Take more and more.

Until a little leads to some.

 

A desperate mistake.

I've failed this time.

Now there is no point to try.

Only I deny its the hardest I've ever tried.

I ended up without you in my live.

 

Hardest part is.

I lost your love in just a few nights.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jae]

Good imagery. You are truly a talent, mr emotion and depth in his writings. Heehee. Keep it up. IM LOVING IT!

~Rem

I really like this poem.
The imagery was rather nice.
Excellent work! :)