Blow it out.

Blow it out.

A Poem by Adam :P
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:) This one has one of my favorite lines in it that ive wrote.

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It feels like changing out your atire.

And we can't escape.

No we won't escape.

There is no escape.

So f**k with fire.

While we f**k with fate.

 

Before we're burnt to the ground.

Lets take a risk.

lie down and die down.

I burn your lips

As the fire spreads around.

 

With your breath

Save us from death.

blow it out.

blow it out.

 

Your sweet your cute but a lier.

Your needs meet falling desire.

Just started a fire.

To watch you blow it out.

© 2010 Adam :P


Author's Note

Adam :P
i would love to start a fire to have someone blow it out.

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Sounds both passion filled and self-destructive. Wanting something despite knowing it could hurt you - that is real passion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aside from a spelling errors here and there this was a good read.
"There is no escape.
So f**k with fire.
While we f**k with fate."
That's a good line. Who new self destruction could sound so good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 17, 2010
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Adam :P
Adam :P

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