Rain

well just read it.

and it comes pouring and the clouds cover up the sun

and it leads to storming but we make it out to fun

and stars fly and we make wishes all the same

and dancing and singing and kissing in the rain.

 

you make me settled for this live i have

i wished for you by wishing for a smile back

tears become this beautifal sound

i wished for the best and you i found

 

and arms streched and a shout

when our loved is silenced will make it loud

holding and living never letting go

i love you so much like you'll never ever know

Author's Note

aw how sweet

Reviews

[just_a_figment]

"i love you so much like you'll never know"-so beautiful
keep writing!

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

That is a good poem too :)
'I wished for you by wishing a smile back'
that was the line that caught my eye. Well thought and beautifully put together.

[Britny_ Grady]

Beautifully written... very sweet and moving. As for the spelling mistakes... go to manage writing. From there you'll get a chart with your works and little icons. Click on the pencil one. You'll be able to go back and fix any mistakes made. Anyways, really good writing.

[Adam :P]

yes had a speeling error can't figure out how to go back and change it lol

[Shade Teller]

This was a really good poem. I like how you started with it being just "and." It kind of makes it unique. I was a little confused at the last line and I think it was just because of a spelling error... and if not my bad.

[KAREN]

Makes me feel like dancing in the rain and gazing at the stars, gives me a happy feeling!

[mir]

Nice poem about a wonderful feeling! You express yourself well! Good job!