Blind

probably one of my very first ever written.

Took a while to notice.

Now there's a complex ahead.

Have to say the times were best here.

As we lie down to rest.

 

Hello night and Good bye day.

You said it just right when it was yours to say.

But I was blind so just, just you may.

It will be alright, as long as you say.

 

Took a while to notice.

But wishes of never letting go.

Togather foever.

Only few now how that goes.

 

Hello night and Good bye day.

You said it just right when it was yours to say.

But I was blind so just, just you may.

It will be alright, as long as you say.

 

Took a while to notice.

But it was so quiet.

This got out of line.

your heart will never be mine.

 

Author's Note

yuh

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Good. The last two lines sorta breathed life into this one, and the repetition was nice.

[+Naomi+]

I like it, Its cool :)
Keep writing