Your voice.

You waited on the world to wait on you.

Your face covered up in a silent dark room.

What led you to the truth?

 

Every moment to look back and be upset.

A wreckless descent.

Your broke and bent.

 

Soft songs playing in the background.

I noticed your voice is my favorite sound.

To know you, I'd be me before anyone else.

 

Would a knock on your door make a difference?

If anyone offered would you get offensive?

Hate grows but passion does to.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Adam :P]

thank you :) i will defeintly change that your way sounds better at the end. just dont know how lol. this website has been runnin real slow on my computer but when it speeds up ill check your stuff out to.

[Nicholas]

VERY good!
I love the whole thing, moving and well written...
though the last line "Hate grows but passion does to" might be better "hate grows, but so does passion" because the "does to" jars a little... at least to me...
but well done! i like it!