my love

If there's one face I want to see,
so beautiful, so true,
one smile that makes a difference,
to everything I do.

If there's one touch I long to feel,
one voice I long to hear,
whenever I am happy,
or just needing someone near.

If there's one joy, one love,
from which I never want to part,
it's you, my very special love,
my world, my life, my heart.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

now this is sweet and romantic.. it has a gentle, breezy flow, rhymes that dance along the page, and tender, heartfelt emotion that tug on the heart strings.. the ending is one that makes the hopeless romantic in me *sigh* with such contentment.. I like how you described how that special someone affects your senses.. "your world, your heart, and your life"... sometimes it is just having them near.. seeing their smile.. hearing their voice... feeling them close.. awesome job.. I really enjoyed this..