Hate my life

When a dream turns to nothing and a path turns to something stop the dream and follow the path no more hurting no more pain just follow that thing and see where it aims become one with pain and one with the lame and you will be immune to fame and be tame dont try to stay youll only become insane try to tame her love over and over again tell there is nothing you can do yet again

Reviews

[Glo]

Loved the first line "When a dream turns to nothing and a path turns to something". It's hard to sometimes to differentiate the two. Would like to see the format on separate lines the way you envisioned it being read. Sometimes that changes the meaning, where the line ends and the next begins.