Rain

Rain

A Poem by theycallmebrades

The other day

Someone asked me what I wanted to be

They were expecting answers such as

A teacher

A doctor

A lawyer

So they were confused when I answered with

The rain

I wish to be the rain

So when you go out into a storm

I can finally be with you

And drench you in my sweet kisses

© 2013 theycallmebrades


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this is just such an extraordinary piece, so sweet and special. Thank you for sharing, I loved it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

theycallmebrades

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Your comment means the world to me(:
annabellee

11 Years Ago

oh you're most welcome :)
Love this! That is all I can say lol wonderful perspective, wonderfully written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

theycallmebrades

11 Years Ago

Thank you! Your feedback means a lot to me(:
Knightingale

11 Years Ago

My pleasure entirely..

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